When I make my own comics I don't write a script like this at all.
I half write and then move into thumbnail, write as I thumbnail, thumbnail and then write...it's a mess 🤣
A well done script is a great communication tool for everyone involved. What stuck out to me was to make the dialogue easy to copy paste for the letterer. I suppose I've also been in the role of doing all those things (editor, writer, designer, letterer, etc.) so I can also think about what direction I would want.
Closed instance. Love no ads, chronological timeline, control over your data, toot privacy settings, and so much more (i.e., these cute mastodon mascots).